Word Metrics revision
THE FANTASTIC MACHINE, a hardboiled steampunk cthulhu thriller about a hotel detective struggling to keep his family & friends safe when an ancient evil is unleashed on the 1905 World’s Exposition.
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Total words: 49448
Accomplished in fiction: I added a scene and tweaked existing material in Chapter Two and I’m working on a fresh new scene to take place between Two and Three.
Other: I like the ideas that are coming from this revision process, but I’m split on the method. I’m rushing and that means I’m cutting corners, “telling” more than “showing”.