Word Metrics revision
THE FANTASTIC MACHINE, a hardboiled steampunk cthulhu thriller about a hotel detective struggling to keep his family & friends safe when an ancient evil is unleashed on the 1905 World’s Exposition.
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Total words: 51110
Other: Touch-ups to chapter 4 resulted in cutting the whole thing and writing one new page, hence the drop in total word count. Jefferson goes to the police station and they basically tell him they’re too busy to deal with his ridiculous notions. The bulk of the page is a detective’s monologue, so, yeah, that’s got to be improved. But it’s in alignment and that’s what I need right now.